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This is meant to be a mysterious drawing, am I correct?
Well, (believe it, if you will) this girl's facial expression actually gives off the effect that she is kind and open instead of cruel and secretive. The eyebrows should be a bit more drawn inwards and turned upwards (in my opinion) and the eyes should be more close to shut. But I think her mouth couldn't be better.
Just a thought,
Ari